The dunk tank one very hot and special summer day it was my birthday I had this one thing everyone was crowding around it was a dunk tank I was just about to go into it the water was freezing the day we filled it we had no hot water all cold. As I came up to that glories tank I came up the ladder and saw the old oak platform this I repeated in my head “this is the end” there I was with every ball thrown a shiver came up my spine then it came my brother with an eagle eye and an arm of a gorilla. He throw the ball hurling towards me I shut my eyes and fell in. The water so cold once I was in I came right out but I had a smirk on my face because my little brother Owen 8 years old just went in. Owen past today missed then ran up and pressed the button. There he was sitting like a duck this was his first time up there I throw the ball it starts hurling towards him it nicks the side there he goes. After a few more dunks almost all the kids went into the tank finally we all played football. That was the day I got a dunk tank but that is not the end in the morning me and my brothers ran out plying in till the time had come. We emptied the tank and their went all over gallons of water spilled out it was amazing I was in the middle and the water passed by as if I was not there. By Luke

The dunk tank one very hot and special summer day it was my birthday I had this one thing everyone was crowding around it was a dunk tank I was just about to go into it the water was freezing the day we filled it we had no hot water all cold. As I came up to that glories tank I came up the ladder and saw the old oak platform this I repeated in my head “this is the end” there I was with every ball thrown a shiver came up my spine then it came my brother with an eagle eye and an arm of a gorilla. He throw the ball hurling towards me I shut my eyes and fell in. The water so cold once I was in I came right out but I had a smirk on my face because my little brother Owen 8 years old just went in. Owen past today missed then ran up and pressed the button. There he was sitting like a duck this was his first time up there I throw the ball it starts hurling towards him it nicks the side there he goes. After a few more dunks almost all the kids went into the tank finally we all played football. That was the day I got a dunk tank

The dunk tank one very hot and special summer day it was my birthday I had this one thing everyone was crowding around it was a dunk tank I was just about to go into it the water was freezing the day we filled it we had no hot water all cold. As I came up to that glories tank I came up the ladder and saw the old oak platform this I repeated in my head “this is the end” there I was with every ball thrown a shiver came up my spine then it came my brother with an eagle eye and an arm of a gorilla. He throw the ball hurling towards me I shut my eyes and fell in. the water so cold one I was in I came right out

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Seaholme One cold night in Birmingham Michigan me luke was about to enter the most amazing unforgiving game ever crush the carrier. The game is easy one guy starts with the ball and you try to tackle him when he fall and hits the ground he has to throw the ball up and then the next guy gets it and it goes on forever now that I have told you about the bruttle game let’s get to the story. There I was at the edge of the game many 6th graders where playing but no 5th graders then me and my friend walked right to the heart of the game and started to play tackling kids twice as big as us all the sudden the ball is thrown it came straight towards me I catch it and start running. Everyone chasing me and then I’m hit I crash to the ground as if a boulder has hit me after a couple of minutes I get the hang of it and get the ball more than most of the 6th graders then I get it again I’m running away from the kids then the seventh graders come including my older brother griffin. I and was still running then griffin bolting towards me hit strikes nailing me as hard as possible it felt like a speeding car had hit me I was on the ground already throw the ball into the I was still on the ground I stayed down for about 45 seconds then I spring into the air.