Monday, February 24, 2014

I was on winter break and was going on a road trip to crystal mountain we where packing. We packed pants socks shirts etc and I also packed my snowboard and gear. My dad had an Audi a nice small car that had 4 seats along with those seats and us we had to fit 3 suitcases 4 snowboards and gear 5 bags of groceries and 4 pillows. This car was so packed we could barley fit in it I didnt think that we where going to fit in but we did fit in but it was so cramped you could barly move without nocking something over. I was a vary painful 4 hours witch felt like twelve hours. but we finally made it to crystal mountain the inn at the mountain was the first place we stopped to check in but they said are room would not be ready for another three hours my heart sank... to be continued

7 comments:

  1. Good job on using descriptive and emotional detail! Maybe you could tell me the color of the "Audi"?

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  2. I can't wait to see the next part because I want to know what you did for the next 3 hours(not in a stalkerish way, I'm not like that����)

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  3. cool good job i want to know what happens

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  4. Wow! Good job, that was an amazing story.

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  5. Great job! I say that because you were specific on what type of car your dad had, and how you fit in the car with all the stuff.

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