snowboarding new version

Just a few days ago i took a risk a risk that i knew was going to pay of this risk was learning to snowboard. I had just woken up and everybody else was already up putting on gear I get dressed and start to put my gear on. first long jons witch are really tight pants and really tight shirt after anouther layer of thick cloths then snowpants and sweat shirt over the sweat shirt I put on my coat and hat then I grabed my helmet and gloves and snowboard boots and finally left. There we where in the car just waiting 40 minutes felt like forever then wehad arived I was thinkinng finally where there so I look at the mountian I felt my heart sink even though this is tiny comparred to other hills but is was sure big to me. mt holly I read I walk in already fealing cold I go to put on my helmat. Then finally the fermilier smell ofcold snow hits me. My dad says"luke you and owen are not going on the big hills you are learning on the bunny hill. once we get to the bunny hill I see a large rope pulling kids up the hill as my dad has told me before that is the tow rope. I go onto the tow rope and fly up the hill I fell before I got to the top feeeling the hard ice/snow told me this was going to be a rough day. and so I got up and held on and got to the top and had my first ride on a actual snowboard hill. I being my first time did not now how to carve so I shot down like a bullet and bought an edge and slammed my face yet again. my dad rushes to pick me up he was the expert or the best in our family saying "luke you can't shoot down that fast and not fall you need to learn how to carve stop and ride the tow rope"